Once upon a time there lived a bear in the wild woods, the bear loved to eat strange but tasty animals.
One day a chicken was wondering around bears bush and bear was awfully hungry, bear couldn't control himself and ate the chicken feeling terribly ill right after.
The next morning bear was feeling guilty but that didn’t keep him from eating wild animals. Bear was feeling sick and didn’t know what to do, later on that day bear died and a wolf came to eat him.
Hey Kelly,
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